Hey readers!
WALT : evaluate ideas and information in a narrative text .
This week for the reading create I have been reading the weird zone .It is about a separated family . But now the dad is acting super weird. This book is about the 2 siblings whose dad keeps on acting weirder and weirder .He acts so unusually the siblings ask him whats wrong .... please check out my blog post if you have time! Scroll to see my work!
Task 1
Kahurangi’s eyes start to shine.I know he gets what I am saying “yeah a LOT of room he adds joining
in . I see Dad sneak a big grin - the first time he has heard the word without breaking into a deep
sweat . “Are you sure ?” he asks “what about the kids zone ?” “Kahurangi and I were thinking about
changing that , right Kahurangi ? I turn my head to Kahurangi and nod . He looks at me with a
confused face . I wink . Kahurangi adds on “Yep sure we were and we were going to rename it to The
weird zone, a zone where all family members are allowed in” Sounds like i’ll fit right in !”
Dad exclaims“one other thing dad” I add “ don't tell us to tidy up” “got it”says Dad. Some traditions
right?
I changed some of the words into more exciting and interesting sentences and words.
Task 2
These are my 5 questions :
Main character is the Dad
1.Q:why didn't you just tell the truth ?
A:because I was embarrassed
2.Q:why didn't you try to put up the tent?
A:If I tried and I couldn't what would I do ?
3.Q:does your tent even have instructions?
A:Um yes but they look too complicated?
4.Q:why didn't you assemble the tent when their mum was there ?
A: I don't know
5.Q:why didn't you ask for help from your children to help set it up ?
A:I already told you …. Um because I was embarrassed .
Hi hannaneh!
ReplyDeleteI like how you discribed your book but maybe next time put some facts about your create task, but everything else on your post was AMAZING!
- Cynthia
thank you very much Cynthia !
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