Hey bloggers ,
We are still in lockdown so I did a lockdown poetry anthology. I started with a tounge twister and a haiku and countdown.
Please come back the following weeks to see the additional poems I write .
I hope you enjoy.
-Hannaneh
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teachers are Miss Bunting, Mrs Lee and Miss Ferguson. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, they will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey bloggers ,
We are still in lockdown so I did a lockdown poetry anthology. I started with a tounge twister and a haiku and countdown.
Please come back the following weeks to see the additional poems I write .
I hope you enjoy.
-Hannaneh
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post!
Hi Hannaneh,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your poems from your anthology, the tongue twister caught me out..and, I agree, Lockdown is definitely not fun. I think your countdown poem is missing the eight word line..but other than that, it's cool.
I hope you're managing to fill in your time at home, enjoying family time & staying active too. There's some great ideas on the student council activity board, up on the Ruru blog.
hi Adele,
Deleteoh yes i forgot the 8th line thank you for reminding me but i will definitly update it soon
thanks for commenting Hannaneh